Well, there’s not really a whole lot to say about these two pages except that my pronoun problem which I spoke about in last week’s post has gotten so much worse. I’m still not sure how to rewrite this other than to slow it down and add setting and narrative, but that will come.
Because this is a repeat problem, I really don’t have a lot to say about these two pages. I hope your own writing is coming along well.
Don’t forget: if you’re having any questions on your own work, patterns that you’re seeing and would like to solve, send me an email.
Until next time, happy writing!